Title: Secrets

Great story so far!!

Can't wait to find out more about that mysterious girl!!

Reviewer: Ivi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/08 07:14 pm
Title: Secrets

I was laughing so hard when he overpowered the poor sweepers the way he did, very Jarod like. I really like how Jarod thinks about possible escape rutes in his daily life, seems very logical. And I can't wait to find out more about Reyna and her past.

TBC? - I hope so 



Author's Response: Thanks, Sarah! I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to keep it as realistically Jarod as possible, so I'm glad you think it's logical. As for Reyna, you'll love it!

Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/01/07 04:03 am
Title: Secrets

Interesting story, I'm curious to see how you finish it and what the girl has to do with it.  Like the part with Jarod and MP. 


Author's Response: Thanks, RaChell! I appreciate your review, your thoughts, and your curiosity!! Those are what keeps a writer going..

Reviewer: RaChell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/01/07 09:45 pm
Title: A Dangerous Encounter

Nice descriptions, easy to read. Engaging beginning!

Author's Response: Anto, Thanks! Coming from you, that means a lot! ^_^

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/01/07 07:49 pm
Title: Secrets

Unusual for Jarod to forget to ask someone's name ... but I'll let it slide! MP is appropriately brusque i.e. you write her well...seems more like S1 or S2 MP, especially with the cigarette. Nice plotline...but please, you have to finish this story...don't keep us in suspense so long again, Sabs!!

Author's Response:

Anto, Ooh, TWO reviews! I'm so SPEEEcial! Thanks! As I told you in the IM, I did it on purpose, but thanks for noticing! As for the timeline, I didn't really think the MP from post-IOTH would work in that scene, but I wasn't consciously thinking about it... I took a couple of MP's characteristics, throughout the series, and just mixed 'em together.

Keep encouraging me, and keeping me accountable, and by golly, you shall have your ending, hopefully!!!  ^_^ Keep it up, and you shall always have advance notice w/ it. And, again, thanks!

Reviewer: Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/07 07:46 pm
Title: Another One Alone

Please more


Author's Response:

Vid, Thanks for your review! And, there ya go! Chapter 4 is now up! enjoy, and please, don't forget to review! I love reviews!!!!  *rubs hands in anticipation*

Reviewer: Vid Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/12/06 07:26 am


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