Good job! Are you ever going to update this?Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/06/15 07:14 pm
Can't wait to read the sequel!Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/07 04:05 pm
Interesting! I'll look forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/07 03:01 pm
this was to good...update soonReviewer: IceQueen20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/07 06:08 pm
Well, the story is interesting and I commend you on even attempting to write in a foreign language. I've studied several languages, but would never try to write a story in any other than english. Having said that, this story would be easier to follow if you had it read by a beta. A few things are a bit confusing. Overall, though good story. Please continue
Author's Response: Yeah, I know ... can you tell me where to get a beta? That would be nice ...
Date: 23/11/06 09:52 pm
i like it
Reviewer: ash Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/11/06 06:08 pm
Loved it, getting quite interesting.
Date: 20/11/06 03:34 pm
please update soon!
Date: 19/11/06 02:59 pm