This is going to sound weird but to me this piece read like a rising and ebbing tide, with each verse a wave... I liked it!
Author's Response: Thanks middleman, wasn't sure what I was going for here, this is not the kind of writing I am used to.... wails... so few detials... lol, glad you liked it. Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 04:01 pm
A truly beautiful poem. Once. . .Again is good too, but this one almost made me cry.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. Hopefully if I do another one, will actually make you cry.
Date: 25/07/07 04:45 pm
Sums up Jarod the Pretender doesn't it? Love the last line. Well done, well done!
Oh thanks so much, my first poetry attempt ever (and it doesnt even rhyme...lol)
Reviewer: Ra-Chell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/09/06 11:38 am