Reviews For The Chase
Title: Chapter 1

Good attempt at a storyline, but the dialogue doesn't sound right between the characters. It's as if they're having a tough time speaking freely. It sounds like you're describing the story through the characters jagged dialogue.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous star [Report This]
Date: 19/04/10 07:31 pm


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