Very nice, Kye. Poor Jarod, the death magnet. And now is the time he really need Sydney and Sydney is actually there for him. But does he realize that? Nope. Great job of pulling the emotions out of Jarod. Can easily see the guilt building up in him. So how soon til the next chapter?
Author's Response: yeha, poor Jarod is a death magnet isnt he? and about time Syd is there for J dont oyu think? lol. thanks for the review, hope you like the next chaps comming
Date: 01/02/08 09:37 pm
This is well written, you can feel your heart breaking as you read it.
I'm still hoping for the part where nobody really dies at the Cenre! (hopefully)
Author's Response: thanks nightowl, glad you liked it. :D im glad you felt the emotions in this chap, and hopefully you read the nexts chap and like them jsut as much
Date: 01/02/08 07:55 pm