WOW! Now that's what I call intense! Lots of emotion, lots of drama and ... well what can I say that the others haven't!
Author's Response: lol, thanks RaChell, with any luck i will be posting another chap tonight for you guys. Glad you liked it so much and hope oyu liek the following chaps.
[Report This]Date: 27/01/08 10:54 pm
Poor Jarod. You have to wonder if Parker is really dead. Remember she said in Redrock jarod. "Does't anybody really die?" seems there's a problem with keeping them dead. epsecially the bad guys!
You really make the reader feel for him. It's not always easy to write and make the reader feel the emotion you are trying for, you did. Good job.
Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Author's Response: Hey nightowl, im glad you seem to like it. yes, you have to wodner, after all your right, now one does really stay dead in the centre do they? lol. thanks on the emotion part, im glad you felt for him, i did do this ages ago, years ago acutally lol, so i reread it and thoguth some parts needed to change but didnt, so im glad oyu liked it
[Report This]Date: 23/01/08 09:48 pm
Great job, Kye. Pull those emotions out and put them throught the wringer. I can so totally see Sydney erupting at Jarod like that and then regretting it later. How soon til the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks Tina!! glad you liked it and as i reread it before posting i was thinking might be a little to far ooc for Syd, but its written and done so blah lol. the next chap wont be long, im gonna make me a note to do it lol
Date: 20/01/08 08:17 pm
