Wow!!! I . . . (sputter, sputter) . . . WOW!
A whole chap of excellent writing, and then you leave us with a cliff hanger! Meanie! I just hope there's more on the way. Preferably soon. (fidgets) Very, very soon . . .
Author's Response: I have made MP speechless! wow, that is fantastic lol... I am glad you liked it so much an di swear im gonna set an alarm so i will be posting another chap tomorrow for you. if you liked this i know you are going to oh so love whats coming (insert evil laugh here) lol i lvoe teasing Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/07 02:43 pm
Great story, great twist. I like how MP followed her heart, but in a way that the Centre couldn't prove anything. A car accident could have been caused by any number reasons, but a deliberate accident (contradiction, I know) would be plausible for them. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks a heap tina, really appricaite you taking the time to reveiw :D i thought car crash made sense too when i wrot eit so long ago lol, so glad it still makes sense yay
Date: 07/12/07 12:33 pm
I love this, so glad you started posting here now!!!
Author's Response: thanks jacci lol, and i did promise a day or two, but i complety forgot again lol
Date: 07/12/07 04:53 am
