Don't leave us hanging! This was a different change of pace. A little dark and unsettling, but I could see more to the story if there's more updates.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/12/09 10:01 pm
sorry forgot the rating.
Author's Response: no worries, and thanks for the rating, your a darl' lol
[Report This]Date: 01/02/08 07:56 pm
OK, now the reveiw for this one! I have finally caught on chapters 4 and 5. Nicely done, intense and not how I expected. Looking forward to see what twists and turns you have hidden up your sleeve for chapter 6.
Author's Response: Thanks RaChell, I am glad you are liking it so far. I will get to posting Chap 6 in a day or two
[Report This]Date: 11/12/07 08:53 pm
Nicely done! Can't wait for chapter 3. But wait a minute! Where do you get the idea that families are perfect and love each other un-conditionally? (shaking head) What world have you been living in? My family is almost like Miss Parker's, my father could have given old man Parker a run for the title of worst father of the year!
Author's Response: thanks RaChell, chap 3 and 4 are posted chap 5 will be done very shortly, so look out for it lol. i dont know where i possibly came up with the idea families are all nice and lovey dovey lol but obviosuly i did. glad you are liking it!
Sorry Onisius, but my mistake! I meant the review for your Falling Snowflake story, not this one! Oh well, that's what I get for trying to catch up on several weeks worth of TP FF in one sitting! Sorry about that! RaChell
Author's Response: Thats ok RaChell, was thinking it didnt make much sense anyway lmao
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/07 11:04 pm
Wow is right! I did not see that coming at all! But I love it. Oh how I love JMP. Can't wait for more, good story. :) Good series! :-D
Twingirl
Author's Response: thanks a lot :D :D glad you liked it and i will remember to post another chap tonight or tomorrow, i swear. and thanks heaps for the feedback Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/12/07 12:11 am
I would agree with RaChell, but since you are betaing a story for me....and I have noticed you are doing the same thing with Grace. Is completed, but you are teasing those who haven't read it already. Is that what you call playing with your PTB power?
Author's Response: Yes Tinanaz, you be nice to me or there will be heaps of red in it for you (or would that be no red for you?) lol And to cove my butt, Gracie has nothing to do with me when it comes to posting. That is all Jacci's fault, she controls our stories here, and i do on the other site i post them for us. thanks though for bugging me lol, i will post now for you all
Date: 30/10/07 10:53 am
Kyyye, oh Kyyyyye? Is there any more to this story?
Author's Response: hey, yes sorry, i forgot all about rep on mp lol, my bad. i will try my hardest to get them all up for you and glad you like enough to annoy me
Date: 20/10/07 06:09 pm
Hmm, I see you are a tease! You writejust enough to catch the reader's attetion and then....
Where is the rest? What does one have to do to get more?
Author's Response: Sorry! lol. I forgot I even had anything on here lol I Have up to chapter 18 finished and ready to post, which I have else where. I will get them posted here as soon as I can. Promise! lol Reviewer: RaChell Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/01/07 09:30 pm
great story! i really like it. i can't wait for more.....
great work!
Author's Response: hey thanks! more is coming, I promise, just need to remember to post here as well lol. Sorry for not responding ealier, i didnt realise i had a reivew lol oops.
[Report This]Date: 22/09/06 03:37 pm
