Nice story, great to see Jarod in a more humanized form rather the perfect pretender most people paint him as.  It seems I've read this before and left a review.  Or am I just delisuional?

Author's Response: thanks for the nice review RaChell, I did like making things harder for Jarod and not have him look, frown, and go, yep, i can do this first go. And you might have, this was in response to a challenge and is also posted on FFNet. thanks again