very good. can't wait for more jared parker
Author's Response: Thanks mpj, happy to see you like it and there will be more coming shortly
Date: 12/01/08 06:52 am
I really like how you mix the sarcasem with the awful torture and pain. Keep up the good work. (Don't make me call Willy and Gar. Trust me, that's not something you want)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. And it would certianly be a neat trick if you could resurrect Gar.
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Date: 29/01/07 05:35 am
Nice! Very nice! Now stop teasing us and get the rest up. I'm beginning to feel as impatient as Miss Parker. Does the word "Now!" mean anything to you? ;)
Author's Response: Ummm, let me think. One syllable, rhymes with bow and conveys the sense of urgency???? Am I close???
More will be coming soon I promise.
And for the record NOBODY is ever as impatient as Miss Parker I don't think.
Date: 28/01/07 06:15 pm
Nice beginning but where is the rest?
Author's Response: The rest is on the way, bad me, kinda forgot about it in the mp upgrade, but will be loading it soon.
Date: 24/01/07 09:17 pm
Great start to this you guys. Keep it up.
Parker has the chair... hmm, I bet that didn't go down too well with Lyle.
Author's Response: thanks a lot yay, and poor Lyle, he would not be happy sharing
Date: 05/09/06 08:25 am
good first chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, we will be putting more up soon I hope
Date: 05/09/06 02:47 am