I love this! A guy who actually wants to use Jarod for non-evil purposes, and someone to thwart Lyle's vicious controlling tendencies. But it's unfinished . . . :( Any plans on further chapters?
Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/10/08 07:21 am
Oh, that's great! I loved this chapter from the moment I read the title. Poor wittle Bobby's not gonna be happy. Can't wait to see where you take this next.
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 25/07/08 05:56 pm
Did I read this story somewhere before? I'm sure I did but if I remember it correctly it was longer?
OR it is deja vu or my inner sense is finally developing. Now if I hear dead people... well I don't think you'll want to read anything I post. ;-p
I don't remember if Jarod ever finds true freedom or if Parker ever shifts in her position...or maybe Lyle gets what is coming to him. Was the story ever finished? Now i'll be hunting this one down.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/07/08 05:25 pm
