Wonderful story! I had to read your work to learn from a pro! I Hope to read more
Author's Response: Aww, I'm hardly a pro, but thank you :)
Date: 15/08/06 07:06 pm
Yay!! werry intence beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I at first had missed to mark this story as complete though, but you never know, there might be a sequel coming up..
Date: 14/08/06 06:23 am
hi, very nice stoy, please keep on writing
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll see if I get around to write a sequel at some point!
Date: 11/08/06 01:04 pm
It's very good!! I love the exchange between the two, however it's more like Parker's leading the "game"!
I'm looking for a sequel!! ^^
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I'll see what I can do about a sequel, it time and inspiration allows it :)
Date: 11/08/06 12:10 pm