Just ran across this story and you're right, knowing the character in advance would have totally spoiled it. Very creative and well-written. The twist at the end was a real surprise.
Author's Response: YAY. I'm glad it worked for you!
Date: 25/04/08 09:17 pm
Lyle always the psycho ! I still can't get used to his food habits. You described very well his tortured mind and his very fondness for human flesh.
Author's Response: thanks, glad you liked... and yes, evil Lyle is just the best *smirks*
Date: 21/05/06 12:22 am
Ohhh.... I sooooo liked that. But you tricked me, I thought it was Jarod at first. That Mr Lyle is a very bad man, but oohh so delicioously so. Seductively written as well, very smooth.
Author's Response: Oh, yay. That was my initial intention to have it come across as Jarod. Hadn't thought it worked out though - so even happier now. Glad you liked it. *bows*
Date: 20/05/06 03:10 pm