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Title: A Mother's Thoughts

I read this story a couple of times and I still like it. Parker might seem a bit cold and detached, but that's just what appears on the surface... I like the fact that in the end you made them become "a couple", and I love both Ethan and Broots' advices to Jarod.

Here are the lines I loved the most:

*** FUNNY

“Oh no,” Jarod said. “Not at all.” The pretender glanced up at Sydney, a sly grin spreading across his face. “Well...” he continued. “She does bother me in a way. But it is not the way that you think.”
Sydney smiled. “You find the sexual attraction to be distracting.”
Jarod’s head nearly spun around in shock. Wide brown eyes stared up at Sydney in a wonder that bordered on fear. “You know about that?” he cried.
The psychiatrist did his best not to laugh out loud. “Anyone who has ever been in the same room with the two of you knows about it.”

*** VEERY SWEET

“It’s cold out here, Parker,” Jarod scolded. “Go back inside where it is warm.” Casually leaning forward, Jarod kissed her as he pulled the fluffy edges of her robe more snugly around her. The aura that Ethan could see around his sister suddenly brightened to a blinding intensity and wavered outward until it encompassed the man holding her.

*** LOVELY

One did not need to be an empath to see what thoughts were running through Jarod’s head. Ethan knew that his brother was remembering the hundreds of moments that had occurred between him and Miss Parker in the last eight months. Moments when she had saved for him the last slice of dessert or slept on a miniscule corner of mattress so that he could have more than his share of the bed. How many times had Ethan seen Miss Parker leave the last three bites of food on her plate, only to nonchalantly pass them to Jarod? How often had she perched on the corner of the couch to watch some senseless film for the hundredth time, while Jarod sat contentedly on the floor with his back propped against her legs? This had not been the first time Parker had risen early to see Jarod off on some new adventure. Ethan knew that it would not be the last.

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/07/13 09:32 pm
Title: Path Found Revised

Interesting depiction of insight between the story that should've continued on in the series. Though the Parker in this storyline is a lot more guarded and closed off just makes the reader wonder what else lurks in the minds of these characters among lifes everyday struggles.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/10 10:03 pm
Title: Path Found Revised

ah.. another one in--again. please write more.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 07:38 pm
Title: Path Found Revised

Somehow this story merges into a soft fluffy aura in the end.. a cozy feeling in sharp contrast to how it started out, fragmented and cold. >"No," Charles said thoughtfully. "He doesn't fear them. He seems to be connected to them in some way, as though they share a terrible secret." I think this quote sums up their life together, perfectly. >Jarod knew that his sanity could never withstand being completely alone in the world. Also another truth concerning Jarod.. hinting to what he's been through to cure this loneliness.. Another well written story, please keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Mira Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/06/06 09:35 am
Title: A Mother's Thoughts

Beautiful story, pretty much as I would think Parker and Jarod would behave in that situation.

Reviewer: Tess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/05 02:53 am
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