Reviews For Hell Hath No Fury
Title: Part 1

I can't see Lyle as anything but a monster, but I like the concept and you write well. You are good storyteller and you kept the characters in character.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/15 02:18 am
Title: So Long and Thanks for the Fish

Well, I hope I can articulate my thoughts to your satisfaction. ' ) First, this is an interesting concept. Second, I don't belive that Jarod would have asked Tadi about Lyle unless he was also planning to make sure she stuck around long enough to give him some answers. He's a genius, afterall; he would be suspicious of someone who "bumped" into him and also had a picture of Lyle in her wallet. He would smell Centre. Now, as for Raines and Lyle, as crazy as the Centre, Lyle should have known better than to tell Raines his plans...Is Tadi Lyle's daughter or has he just become attached to a kindred spirit?

Reviewer: michelle Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/01/06 02:36 am


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