Her reaction sounds very accurate to me, exactly what I'd expect her to say. Because really, the only reason they can have any kind of relationship is if they never realize it, and even if they do, you never say it. That's breaking the code man! Well, actually that's exactly what it is.
Oh well I'll stop rambling now. Truly great piece. Both true, and beautifully written. Wonder if I guessed the characters right...
Author's Response: *bows deeply* I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, that's breaking code indeed. It just had to shatter upon voicing what was always unspoken of Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/12/07 03:43 am