Looking forward to more! Anything coming soon?
Author's Response: This month will probably be slow as school is really really busy in these final weeks. I won't forget about it though don't you worry!
[Report This]Date: 03/04/07 07:13 pm
yes, I liked it. There aren't enough of new stories to keep me entertained, so when I find one that does, I find I enjoy it even more.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much. That's great to hear, and I hope it keeps you entertained for a while more.
[Report This]Date: 24/03/07 08:06 pm
can't wait for more! great plot! hope to have more romantic moments in next chapter(s) :o)
cheers!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm hoping to build into the romance very slowly (obviously) so I hope it doesn't disappoint. ;)
[Report This]Date: 24/03/07 11:20 am
I like the hotel room scene but ignoring Angelo's fate and her not telling Jarod about Angelo is not true to character, IMO.
Angelo was one of their first and closest friends so it should be a very sad and emotional moment for them.
Hope you write a scene about it in a future chapter.
Author's Response: Absolutely! I thought about going into that but decided it needed more emphasis than a brief mention since what was important right then was that they were together again. Besides, Parker did try to go into it and Jarod who didn't know, told her to stop. Don't worry. It will come up soon! Thanks for the feedback! Reviewer: Starclipper01 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/03/07 09:21 am
Hey!!
You could always ask the 'secretary' to response to your reviews for you!! (just kidding jacs..hehehe). Another great chapter! I'm glad MP found Jarod.. i wasn't expecting that reunion to come so quickly.. happy ending..now there is a concept!! Again wonderful as usual! I am so glad that your muse has revisted you!
Author's Response: Hahah not needed anymore! I'm responding to everyone's now, this is so exciting. I thought last chapter was so depressing, there needed to be a little light of hope that this wasn't a completely depressing story haha. Thanks, me too! Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/03/07 07:27 am
I love the way you ended this chapter. Keep up the great work,
Author's Response: Thank you very much. These poor guys need a little bit of happiness.
[Report This]Date: 24/03/07 02:15 am
um whoa. this is THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER!!! so if i knew you, i'm pretty sure i'd bow down at your feet and hang out with you every day....cause judging by this story, you've gotta be that awesome :) UPDATE LIKE RIGHT NOW!!
Author's Response: Um whoa. You are clearly amazing and a tad ridiculous. I'll update soon, thank youuuu :) Reviewer: soulmate fo sho Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/03/07 09:19 pm
Great story, I'm glad that Miss Parker got out ok.
Please update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Will do, thanks! Reviewer: celeste Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/03/07 04:26 am
more. soon. please. what a chapter! quite explosive.
Author's Response: I know right, it's a little depressing! Glad you liked it though.
Date: 21/03/07 08:08 pm
Love it please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks, Maggie, I'll try!
[Report This]Date: 21/03/07 04:45 pm
Just read it now and I couldn't stop reading. Please continue soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Heather! Hope you had a lot of time to spare. ;)
Date: 21/03/07 05:10 am
GREAT STORY! I'M GLAD PARKER GOT OUT OK WITH THE BABY. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Author's Response: Will do, thank you so much! Reviewer: Cally24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/03/07 02:47 am
Please update soon! Love the story! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Katie! I'm just glad you're all liking it so much.
[Report This]Date: 21/03/07 02:44 am
ooh you killed Angelo!! I could get upset, but Im guilty of the same! Thanks for updating again, it was a great chapter. I'm glad that MP got out safely.
Author's Response: You sure are! And I thought about your story when I was writing it. It's a very upsetting thing but sometimes these things must happen. Sigh. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/03/07 07:54 am
It was good to see this again, I had to start the story over from the beginning but it made for a pleasant evening of reading.
I'm looking forward to see where and how you are going to finish this. I'm in it for the entire story! Thank you.
Author's Response: Oh good! You got to witness my writing skills improve over the years haha. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 14/03/07 07:24 pm
So you did find time for more writing afterall. Great chapter with a nice suspensful ending, so I hope that means there is more to come soon.. *hint*
Really you are doing a great job, and totally spoiling all of us!
Author's Response: I was on break during the spoiling. So that's why the chapters are coming a bit more slowly now. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/03/07 06:55 am
good chapter....liked the idea behind the virus and programming. looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know nothing about computers so it was a risky decision haha.
Date: 13/03/07 05:08 am
Should have known! Nobody dies at the center!
Author's Response: Nah we wouldn't have a show if they did!
Date: 11/03/07 08:26 am
ooh spoiling us !!! setting a hard precedence to keep up! hehehe. I'm so glad you are writing this! It was Lyle!! Interesting that he is back in the game.
Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: What's a good Pretender story without lots of Lyle action? ;) Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/07 09:26 pm
Like your story a lot. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Morgan.
Date: 09/03/07 06:12 pm
look at you spoiling us! 3 in 3 days..
great chapter.. I really hope MP realized the error in her ways, but it's great she helped Jarod get out! Curious about the mysterious patient.
Author's Response: You are such a faithful reviewer. Maybe I shouldn't have responded back to all these in reverse order haha. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/07 08:43 am
wonder what mp is planning. gather it was emily earlier and wondering who the person in bed is. Let us know.
Author's Response: It's The Pretender, always gotta try and be a little cryptic haha.
Date: 09/03/07 04:43 am
Now this an update pace I could get used to ;).
Really feeling for the two of them, and looking forward to seeing how you are going to move the plot forward, now that MP is back in a position of 'power'.
Author's Response:
Power. What an interesting concept. ;)
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 08/03/07 01:22 pm
yay, another chappie...so soon. :D What is MP planning and what is going to happen to J?
Author's Response: Telling spoils all the fun!
Date: 08/03/07 12:02 am
Yay!! An update :D
Great momentum as usual.. really looking forward to reading on the near future.
Take good care of your muse!
Author's Response: Never you worry, I'm writing as we speak! Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/07 02:35 pm
