Nice chapter! Looking forward to the next. Really enjoyed the brief Broots and Debbie interaction. Very sweet.
Author's Response: And very relevant to the overall story. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01/06/07 10:08 pm
Hey -
I think this was one of your best chapters yet! I really liked it :P .. nice and longish too.. my read to fast for my own goodness really appreciate that. Can't wait to see where you will take it from here!
Author's Response:
That's so interesting you say that because it was one of the hardest to write, lots of plot moving I suppose. Glad you're liking it and I'll try to keep my standards up. ;)
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 31/05/07 01:27 pm
Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/05/07 01:13 pm
um whoa. this is gettin CRAZY!! that dandelion comment from parker was priceless by the way. i NEED to know what's gonna happen, you need to update like yesterday!!
Author's Response: Craaaaazy haha. I'm glad you liked it. It's so similar to a line I used many many chapters ago but still so true! I will update as soon as I can. You know distractions are everywhere for me...
Date: 30/05/07 08:57 pm
Nice, very nice! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you dear. :D
[Report This]Date: 24/05/07 09:54 pm
Love the chapter!!!! You did a very good job with the love making scene! Just enough 'smut' to fit the storry!
Really liked the part:
"I just," he paused, staring up at her with his deep brown eyes, trepidation smeared into every line on his face, "I haven't done this a lot."
Parker grinned, "Oh I see. You pull the 'I've lived in a secret organization's basement for thirty years and they never taught me how to properly screw a woman' card with all the ladies?"
He glared back at her grin and she laughed, leaning into his ear and whispering, "Relax, wonderboy. We'll find out exactly what kind of wonders you've been bestowed with, whether I have to hold your hand the whole way or not."
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Greetz
Author's Response: Oh thank you I was hoping you all would think it fit with the general taste of the story. Haha I liked that part especially too. :) Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/05/07 02:52 pm
Awesome.
Author's Response: Clearly, you are. Thanks. ;)
Date: 22/05/07 11:40 am
So, what is Jarod dreaming about regarding Lyle. Let us know.
Author's Response: Oh no oh now, we'll just have to see!
Date: 22/05/07 01:04 am
great as usual!
i really liked it when Miss P. slammed the fridge and barked out that she had slept with Jarod :o) it was so funny :o)
so, how was it? writing a smut?.... though, this wasn't a real smut but it was soooo great. even better :o) more tempting.
hope more to come soon.
cheers!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yeah not too smutty at all. But it was a dream to write, since it would be a dream for it to ever happen. Siiiiiiiiigh. Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/05/07 12:44 am
My biggest grievance about smut is that as soon as it hits the scene, the plot goes to bits (more like Plot.. what plot..), but you didn't let that happen, in fact you brought it up a notch!! A great chappie, and can't wait to read more :P
Author's Response: Exactly and I could never ever ever let that happen! Thanks very much :D Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/05/07 10:24 pm
dun dun dun...where the hell did molly goooo? and oh dear is lyle not dead?? and yesssss JMP getting some action, gotta LOVE them :) wonderful wonderful chappie, update soon than last time, k thanks.
Author's Response: Oh no maybe she got lost on the way back from getting some ice? ;) Haha you are not paying very well attention, missy, Lyle has clearly been alive for many chapters now. <3 JMP. Thanks for the review, you make me happy! :D
Date: 21/05/07 08:36 pm
Hi, this is my first comment. I have liked a lot your story, so far!
And, about the smut, I think all of us have read enough already and I don't think that this beautiful story needs it.
Anyway, if you wish so... go for it!
Please, just don't let her get pregnant the first time... too much a cliché!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your input. I'm really glad to hear a different opinion and since I haven't written the next chapter yet I'll keep that in mind. I was on the same wavelength as you, so maybe I'll find some way of compromising. Ugh I hate cliche, I'd never!! ;) Reviewer: Nico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/05/07 07:53 am
umm wow. that was kinda amazing. i was all like YEEEEEEESS J AND MP ARE GONNA GET IT ON! haha can't wait for the next chaaapter!
Author's Response: I knew you'd love it. I hope the next chapter lives up to everyone's expectations for the getting it on ;)
Date: 14/05/07 08:57 pm
I really like development of the last 4 chapters. You stayed so true to the characters.
As for the smut part, I would say: go with the flow and don't keep us waiting to long!
Greetz!
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear because that's my number one goal. I will go with the flow, sound advice. Thanks! Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 03:36 pm
Hey -
you just had to go and plant the Lyle seed eh? I live how you did the end w/MP/J.. it would be difficult for her to break pattern, etc, and the shopping trip was cute. Good work! can't wait for more
Author's Response: It can't be too happily ever after! The chapter needed some Centre in it. Thank you thank you. I've always wanted to see Miss Parker shopping like a normal person. I feel it would be a lot more hilarious than how I wrote it. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 01:52 pm
let me say.. the story is great! and getting better and better. especially that Jarod and Miss P. are finally together. you made it so real... so them...
as for smut.... i say you DO IT!
it really would be suitable now. and let me tell you, i can't wait for it :o) you're writing is great and you'll be great writing a smut, as everything else.
cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the input! It does seem appropriate now, which is why I'm sort of excited to do it. Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/05/07 03:57 am
Yay another update. Congrats on surviving another semester.. the winter one always is the most painful eh? What are you taking?
Okay on to the point - a great chappie, glad to see there is a bit of trouble in paradise, it's more real, especially given our hot headed stubborn ass characters we get to play with.
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
I feel the winter one flies by and the fall drags on actually. This semester it was philosophy, american lit, british lit, earth systems and cycles, and poetry writing.
It is more real and while I like reading a good sappy happy story sometimes, I find this sort of attitude more realistic for our twisted characters. Thanks as always :)
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 10/05/07 08:56 pm
such a great story. poor ms. parker doesn't want to let go.
Author's Response: She sure doesn't. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 09/05/07 11:55 am
great! great! great! can't wait for more. i really like this Jaord/Miss P. love/angst thing... it's so..... them :o)
well, as long as they get along OK in the end :o)
Author's Response: It is so them! I've always thought they should get together, but that it would be a difficult transition for them to make with as much as they've been through. Thank you for your thoughts! Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/05/07 05:54 am
Oh the angst! You write it so well. Can't wait for the next installment of your story.
Author's Response: Thank you! Angst might be my favorite haha. And The Pretender has the greatest characters for angst.
[Report This]Date: 08/05/07 08:42 pm
ugh um whoa. seriously?? siiiiiiiiiiiigh
Author's Response: You'll get over it. <3
Date: 08/05/07 08:09 pm
The story really has picked up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The only complaint I have is that you've surpassed MP's chapter quota of 20 chapters and It's a b*tch to have to scroll thru the previous 20 or so chapters to get to the most recent one.
Author's Response: There's a chapter quota? Good to know.. now. Haha oh well I guess. Too late now. Will remember for my next story I suppose. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 24/04/07 08:56 pm
great story ............... keep up the good work. (he says while anxiously awaitig more.)
Author's Response: Thank you, sir! Will do.
Date: 11/04/07 02:30 pm
oh no is she going to run away from them?
Author's Response: Telling would spoil the fun! I think at this point, MP doesn't even know what to do.
[Report This]Date: 10/04/07 10:11 am
Oh what a conflicted MP you presented us with.. with i think is perfect and very true to her character!! I'm nervous about where Lyle is, and the introduction of pop-tarts scene with Cade was so precious! Great chappie.. thanks for sharing :D
Author's Response: Poor MP is always in complete conflict with herself and everyone around her! I'm glad you think it's true to her character, because I certainly think so. Thanks so much. :)
Date: 09/04/07 11:44 pm
