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Title: Breakthrough

Hi, this is my first comment. I have liked a lot your story, so far!

And, about the smut, I think all of us have read enough already and I don't think that this beautiful story needs it.

Anyway, if you wish so... go for it!

Please, just don't let her get pregnant the first time... too much a cliché!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your input. I'm really glad to hear a different opinion and since I haven't written the next chapter yet I'll keep that in mind. I was on the same wavelength as you, so maybe I'll find some way of compromising. Ugh I hate cliche, I'd never!! ;)

Reviewer: Nico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/05/07 07:53 am
Title: Breakthrough

umm wow. that was kinda amazing. i was all like YEEEEEEESS J AND MP ARE GONNA GET IT ON!  haha can't wait for the next chaaapter!

Author's Response: I knew you'd love it. I hope the next chapter lives up to everyone's expectations for the getting it on ;)

Reviewer: soulmatefosho Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 08:57 pm
Title: Breakthrough

I really like development of the last 4 chapters. You stayed so true to the characters.

As for the smut part, I would say: go with the flow and don't keep us waiting to long!

Greetz!



Author's Response: That's so nice to hear because that's my number one goal. I will go with the flow, sound advice. Thanks!

Reviewer: Morgan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 03:36 pm
Title: Breakthrough

Hey -

 

you just had to go and plant the Lyle seed eh? I live how you did the end w/MP/J.. it would be difficult for her to break pattern, etc, and the shopping trip was cute. Good work! can't wait for more 



Author's Response: It can't be too happily ever after! The chapter needed some Centre in it. Thank you thank you. I've always wanted to see Miss Parker shopping like a normal person. I feel it would be a lot more hilarious than how I wrote it.

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 01:52 pm
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