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Title: Steam

The story really has picked up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  The only complaint I have is that you've surpassed MP's chapter quota of 20 chapters and It's a b*tch to have to scroll thru the previous 20 or so chapters to get to the most recent one.

Author's Response: There's a chapter quota? Good to know.. now. Haha oh well I guess. Too late now. Will remember for my next story I suppose. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/04/07 08:56 pm
Title: Steam

great story ............... keep up the good work. (he says while anxiously awaitig more.)

Author's Response: Thank you, sir! Will do.

Reviewer: jimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/07 02:30 pm
Title: Steam

oh no is she going to run away from them?

Author's Response: Telling would spoil the fun! I think at this point, MP doesn't even know what to do.

Reviewer: mpj Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/04/07 10:11 am
Title: Steam

Oh what a conflicted MP you presented us with.. with i think is perfect and very true to her character!! I'm nervous about where Lyle is, and the introduction of pop-tarts scene with Cade was so precious! Great chappie.. thanks for sharing :D

Author's Response: Poor MP is always in complete conflict with herself and everyone around her! I'm glad you think it's true to her character, because I certainly think so. Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/07 11:44 pm
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