As part 1, a great set-up. Another recap of the show from his POV. ---- Jarod using the line ‚life goes on’ is quite interesting....from a certain point of view. ;) ----- And what a great dialogue! Just as it would have been on screen! (‘Lady who?’ ….those parts just.cracked me up) ----- One note: "She believes that she still loves him, even after what he's done to her. " - actually I do think she does REALLY love him. She deceives herself, and lets him deceive her, yes, but…..she loves him. .--- but never mind me… cuz on the other hand, its quite in the cannon for Jarod to think that way…he wants to believe it. He has no love lost for Daddy P. and that’s what he wants to believe for her too, after all. (if I make sense *g *)

Author's Response: Absolutely makes sense. First rule of a first person story is to never trust the narration of the character. Very nice critique there.