This is the best fan fic story I have ever read! I couldn't stop reading and not many stories can do that. You stayed true to the characters and gave each of them the ending they deserved. The relationship between Miss Parker and Jarod was the perfect mixture of sweet, sassy, sarcastic, and romance. You thought of everything and created the perfect ending to an amazing show that ended way too soon. I'm sure I'm not the only one who believes you gave us the closure we all desired for this series. Standing ovation, well deserved!
Reviewer: Twixen93 Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/05/12 06:14 pm
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Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/07 08:01 pm
Author's Response: Put that pointy stick away! That's not the last chapter, I promise haha. I guess naming it "closure" was a bad idea? Thanks for reviewing. I love to see such emotional reactions haha, even if they're angry and directed to me. ;)
That's not the end? Oh good! You had me worried there for a minute, now I can stop biting my nails. (Big sigh of relief!) But don't push it! You know how impatient some of us readers can get and Morgan said it best:
"I need a new chapter! I really do! Like yesterday! (No presure here.)"
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 20/06/07 06:20 pm
Awesome.
Author's Response: Clearly, you are. Thanks. ;)
Date: 22/05/07 11:40 am
let me say.. the story is great! and getting better and better. especially that Jarod and Miss P. are finally together. you made it so real... so them...
as for smut.... i say you DO IT!
it really would be suitable now. and let me tell you, i can't wait for it :o) you're writing is great and you'll be great writing a smut, as everything else.
cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the input! It does seem appropriate now, which is why I'm sort of excited to do it. Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/05/07 03:57 am
great! great! great! can't wait for more. i really like this Jaord/Miss P. love/angst thing... it's so..... them :o)
well, as long as they get along OK in the end :o)
Author's Response: It is so them! I've always thought they should get together, but that it would be a difficult transition for them to make with as much as they've been through. Thank you for your thoughts! Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/05/07 05:54 am
can't wait for more! great plot! hope to have more romantic moments in next chapter(s) :o)
cheers!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm hoping to build into the romance very slowly (obviously) so I hope it doesn't disappoint. ;)
[Report This]Date: 24/03/07 11:20 am
It was good to see this again, I had to start the story over from the beginning but it made for a pleasant evening of reading.
I'm looking forward to see where and how you are going to finish this. I'm in it for the entire story! Thank you.
Author's Response: Oh good! You got to witness my writing skills improve over the years haha. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 14/03/07 07:24 pm
Should have known! Nobody dies at the center!
Author's Response: Nah we wouldn't have a show if they did!
Date: 11/03/07 08:26 am
Like your story a lot. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Morgan.
Date: 09/03/07 06:12 pm
Wow, this was ona of the best stories hat I have read. But the end, I hope you post next chapter soon.
Author's Response:
Today's your lucky day. One year later. ;)
Reviewer: lucitana Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/05/06 12:20 pm
Please dont stop now!
Merry Christmas and thanks for a lovely story!
Author's Response: I added another chapter. Merry Christmas to you, too!
[Report This]Date: 13/12/05 09:17 pm
Want more!! keep it coming!
Oops forgot to say please!!!
Author's Response: Only because you said please.
[Report This]Date: 26/11/05 07:06 pm
Thank you for contiuing this. I look every night to see if there is a new chapter added.
Gotta love the Jarod/Parker stories. And you put them together so nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks. Jarod and Parker are the greatest characters to put together.
[Report This]Date: 20/11/05 09:40 pm
Great character setup.....I feel as if I am reading the opening transcript in the actual show! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Awesome. More's on the way. ;)
[Report This]Date: 07/11/05 01:53 pm
This has been an interesting story. I'm pleased that you are updating on a regular basis. i come home each night to check on it. Please continue!
Author's Response: Aw that is just so sweet. :)
[Report This]Date: 26/10/05 01:38 am
I'm enjoying this story and the regular updates. I hope you continue to update as quickly as possible!!
Author's Response: I'm doing my best to keep up. I'm glad people are reviewing because it does remind me to check back and post a new chapter. Thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 24/10/05 11:16 pm
ok now a few words on part one (for now):
Very convincing how you draw her! Trying to tell herself how strong and – as the running theme shows - invincible she is!
*maybe I just don’t want to suffer alone*……….yess that’s a reasonable reason! For leaving her behind alone in that hell he has now her on his heels. Like you point out in one of the last sentences. ‘he deserves it for leaving the centre’ (aka ‘me’ uh?)
great first chapter that made a sort of whole recap of the series for me now after quite some long time of absence of watching or reading!
Author's Response: Thank you. I know how you feel since it's been a while since I've read or seen anything about Pretender. I'm rereading my story with you all so that it can all come back and I can commence writing. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/10/05 06:47 pm
i remember your story! i remember that i loved it back then, now i get into gear to read again........back then i think i didnt get an ending........maybe now??? *blink*
i will read again with joy, that one is for sure
Author's Response: That thrills me to know you remembered me! I don't have an ending written yet, but I'm much closer to it. You never know. I just may be inspired again. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/10/05 08:43 pm
Keep posting.
Author's Response: I'm trying to post a chapter a day. So keep checking back!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/05 01:53 am
I liked Miss Parkers inner war. If it's okay to trade jarods liberty for hers...and I liked what she was thinking about her childhood and her friends...so I'm waiting for the next part! =)
Author's Response: Thank you. The next part is up now.
[Report This]Date: 07/10/05 08:06 pm
