wow, wow wow love it
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/14 11:22 am
<3 Fantastic, fantastic story all around! :)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 05:52 pm
Aww, this chapter made this JMP shipper so happy <3
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 05:25 pm
Yay, Sam! <3
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 05:13 pm
Yay, Jarod's gonna be ok! :)
I love Angelo enjoying the rain. <3
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 04:11 pm
Way to go, Broots! Also, Angelo <3 I feel good going to bed now, to continue tomorrow. :)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 08:30 am
I keep saying I'm going to stop after this chapter and go to bed cuz it's after 2am, but I can't cuz it's soooo good! Poor Jarod- OMG.
One thing, though, in the disclaimer, you spell Centre wrong. :)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 08:19 am
I lurve the fact that Jarod threw the snowballs at Miss P! :)
Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/13 08:01 am
I loved this fiction Phenyx, as I loved almost every other story you've written. In this one MP & J attitude towards each other change a lot. It's nice because as soon as you're afraid for the fact he's calling Zoe, you realize that was just a moment to try to forget his problem with Parker and one second later they're kissing each other. That's cool! And so it is the part where Broots and Sam find out about them, I had this strangest grin on my face during my reading of that scene! ;P
You're one of the best writers around here... Well done :)
Date: 25/07/13 02:51 pm
>"Do you want me to hurt you?" Parker hissed. >A slow grin broke out on Jarod's face. "If I said 'yes', would you still respect me in the morning?" *snickers* But um yeah, another great story from you, a bit sappy-ending of course, but shows that these people if they put their mind to it, are quite dangerous! I really can see Jarod being so overwhelmed becoming a parent, a father. Heck, I'm surprised he'd be able to stand up for a while, much less sleep.
Reviewer: Mira Signed [Report This]Date: 20/06/06 02:17 pm
Am a new fan of pretender fan fic and this is simply one of the best stories I've read. Rivetting stuff - sat at the computer way past my bedtime to read it !! Can't wait to get started on reading your other fics. Keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/09/05 09:00 pm