It's interesting, but the transitional timelines run together a little to quickly. A reread at times seems to help. A good piece though.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/01/10 05:08 am
Excellent story. Loved how it progressed in time hitting the major moments, and conveying a sense of how the characters felt and suffered from Jarod's and Parker's sadness, love, and longing to Jordan taking over the story. I remember reading this story when I was really into angst and loving it, and still to this day I find it evokes emotion in me. Anyways I could ramble on and on about how much I enjoyed this, but I won't. Again excellent story.
Reviewer: ron Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/06 08:38 pm