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Title: Slurred

Ooh, that was wonderfully written. I could feel the other woman's uncertainty as well as the tension, which was damn near unbearable. Great atmosphere and nice flow. And great touches like this: "...a secret....a langauge only they could translate." Very nice.

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/05/09 07:40 pm
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