every word so beautiful it melts my heart. and an story so hot it melts all of my insides and my soul. delicious, your a genius with wordes. the rythm is perfect, a wonderful flow. impulse - like a motive iin a classical piece of music you compose a beutiful thing here. and the two introperspectives are so well written - it' soooo rare! just awesome.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/16 10:25 pm
Wow! That was very nicely done, love the descriptions, dialogue, and uh, "everything" ..
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 02/06/10 06:57 am
What a truly wonderful little story ..... you write so well ....thank you!!!
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/05/08 08:36 pm
it's such a beautiful story!
i really enjoed it and am sure everyone will.
Date: 02/11/06 07:57 am
it's such a beautiful story!
i really enjoed it and am sure everyone will.
Date: 02/11/06 07:57 am
Beautiful. Just beautiful. The every line is just amazing.
Reviewer: M Freakishness Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/05 04:41 am