Reviews For Breathing
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I know she's sometimes portrayed as "the all powerful, heartless ice queen" but she hurts like everyone else and like anyone else, she can be pushed right over the edge. I lvoe that Sydney was there for her. Sweet but not gooey. Good job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/10 08:50 pm
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Very nicely written.  I would say this is sweet without being over done, a well excuted piece of writing. 

I have to agree with Jersygirl, they did kiss as children and yes, from their POV I do think it counts.  Afterall, the Centre doesn't let one stay a child for long and every bit of something 'special' would be treasured in that hell hole.  

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/02/07 11:03 pm
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her loneliness could make her do weird things.......and at a breaking point getting suicidal and just stopping breathing would be one of them i can imgagine. one minor thing....he did kiss her before i believe, when she kissed him as children. *g*

Author's Response: THanks :-) But do kisses count you give each other when you're kids? Isn't there even a slight difference? :-)

Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/05 01:57 pm


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