Title: The Lies That Blind

Hi just read your story it's great but please, p;ease write more.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/06/14 10:24 pm
Title: V - A Father's Lies

Oh, damn. It's not finished. *curses*

I've immensely enjoyed what you've written thus far and would be thrilled if you'd kindly update. I know all too well the bitch that real life can be but please consider additional chapters. Yes, I'm willing to beg, haha.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 05:42 am
Title: IV - The Next Generation

Great job!

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 05:35 am
Title: III - The First Pull

What is Franken-rat going to do? I can't wait to find out..

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 05:28 am
Title: II - Loose Threads

Very well written and I admit, I'm intrigued.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 05:22 am
Title: The Lies That Blind

I'm loving this, clicking to the next bit ...

now

Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/11 05:16 am
Title: V - A Father's Lies

Good so far, what happens next!?! More additions. it's too good to stop right here and not add more to the plot.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/12/09 04:00 am
Title: V - A Father's Lies

More, more, more please!!!! It's great!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/09 06:55 pm
Title: V - A Father's Lies

I cant believe you ended it here!  Ah man, I wish there was more.

Reviewer: Jade Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/09/08 04:14 am
Title: The Lies That Blind

It's so sad that it wasn't finished...

Reviewer: Mia Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/03/08 08:30 pm
Title: The Lies That Blind

I thoroughly enjoyed this. But this is again, a story that desparately needs an ending. It leaves you hanging and twirling in the wind. If at all possible please finish this.

Reviewer: Tess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/05 02:12 am


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