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Title: Snow Storm

Hi just read your story it was good. At lest Jarod got a lot of sleep.

 Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/14 08:28 am
Title: Snow Storm

It was okay.  There were too many spelling errors and they were quite distracting.  A good beta reader would help a lot.  Also, learn the difference between you're and your, accept and except, then and than, through and threw, and a comma and a semi colon. I liked when Jarod asked Lyle if he hitchhiked. That was funny.

 Reviewer: Rory Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 04:42 am
Title: Snow Storm

Another funny one. It kinda sounded too close for comfort there if he didn't escape.

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/04/10 01:13 am
Title: Snow Storm

I enjoyed this. It was different to so many other 'Jarod is recaptured. Jarod escapes from the Centre.' I liked the different way you utilized Cox. And more importantly, the fact this story didn't turn into another shipper-fluff thing.

 Reviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/08 03:18 am
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