This just had too many plotlines in one story. Also, you made leading characters really not seem like their respectable characters on the series. Confusing and incredulous to a point. None of the plotlines really culminated into anything worth continuing. Just one plotline after another. You demeaned the characters to an extent. Lastly, no way Brigette had a pretender gene. Her character just didn't seem to have the qualities of one.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/04/10 08:57 pm
I'm so surprised not to find any reviews on this story!! It's so great, you had made such a good work!You have a really good imagination!! How could you have imagined all the links between Cox, Kyle, Lyle, Brigitte and Alex!! There is so much action!! I can't believe Ms Parker had kissed Cox!!! It's so nauseous!!! I hope you're writing a sequel!! Congratulations, bravo!! PS: Could you tell me if there will be a sequel? Thank you!!
Reviewer: Georgia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/01/06 09:44 am