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Title: Freedom lies beneath reality

so absolutely wonderful.. this dynamic between jay and jarod.. you draw it flawlessly!thanks so much for this story!

 Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/16 11:38 am
Title: Safe; not sound

Looooove it

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Date: 16/04/16 10:28 am
Title: Introductions and plans

Aaawesome and thrilling

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Date: 16/04/16 07:44 am
Title: Freedom lies beneath reality

Good sequel. The flow between each of the storylines were done well. I can imagine it's tough to continue a storyline into several sequels unless you've got the whole series written down.

Author's Response: yeah, it is indeed. losing the plot and walking a fine line between character development and staying close enough to the original characters from the series. I'm glad you liked the whole ride. Thanks for reviewing

 Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/04/10 12:19 am
Title: Day of Disappearance

Nice insights into the characters. It will be interesting to see how deep the relationships go .

Author's Response: read on in the sequel then ;)

 Reviewer: Tess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/05 03:15 pm
Title: Nowhere Fast

Hey, nice one ! Is there some more chapters ?

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like the story. Yes, there are more chapters to come. The story's a work in progress. I'm posting a new chapter every one or two weeks.

 Reviewer: Luv Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/09/05 07:00 pm
Title: Day of Disappearance

Go on, go on... the missing one is not going to stay in that hellhole forever.

Author's Response: :) nope, he isn't

 Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/08/05 06:45 pm
Title: Inscrutable past and dark future

keep writing !!! As I already told you, I like your story.

Author's Response: *bows* thanks. I'm glad you like it. It's been a long ride

 Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/08/05 07:16 pm
Title: Calculations

Wonderful story! Keep writing because I definitely want some more chapters. I hope Parker and Jarod will kick Lyle's ass in the end, this is always the best part. lol

Author's Response: Hey. Glad you like it! No worries, there will be quite some chapters to come. Thanks for your review.

 Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/05 04:20 pm
Title: Calculations

Dramatic ... and perfectly in character. It's exactly how I would expect Jarod and Miss Parker to behave under the circumstances. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to reply. Still trying to catch up with what happened while I was on holiday.
Anyway, I'm glad the story works for you so far and that you think I got the characters ok *happy grin*. Thanks for telling me so!

 Reviewer: Angus Hardie Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/07/05 10:02 pm
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