Okay, first of all, I think the only reason the fire started so quickly was because it was Miss Parker who was lighting. In real life it takes a little more time to start a fire (at least to me), but it was probably a case of ignite or being shot. You don't mess with MP.
All kidding aside, this was a nice piece. I'm not much of the sappy and shippy kind, but I do enjoy a good story. The writing is good and efficient, but not as perfect as I've read in other stories. Still, for fans of JMPs, it's a must.
Date: 22/09/13 10:30 am
You get hooked and then you're left hanging..evil, just evil..kidding..it was intriguing at the start.Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/12/09 06:48 am