Action, drama, a little romance, danger and a wonderful happy ending! This was great, Vania. I hope you will write more and share your talent with us. Say "yes". *smiles*
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this little piece. I was overjoyed to read your kind and insightful words. :) Maybe it will encourage me to write again soon - it's been so long. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/06/11 05:32 am
This was really, really great! Can't believe your were only 16 when you wrote this! Thank you that you didn't let yourself be discouraged by the lack of reviews and finished your wonderful story!
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/09/10 07:59 pm
I really enjoyed your story!
Reviewer: gagnonfuji Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/12/06 11:53 pm
hi, I just read your story and here's a long awaited review: your enligsh very good, especially for being 16 when you wrote this. there are a couple of errors, but not too bad (people instead of persons for example). 2. when you write, add more "flow" for example; Jarod turned on the light as he made his way to the cough instead of "Jarod went to the living room then turned on the light. He sat on the couch next to Miss Parker. Overall, good story.
Reviewer: michelle Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/08/06 07:22 pm
