Oh, you have to finish this! This is one of the best Pretender stories I've read. Nice, deep, intricate plot...excellent characterization. And I love how Jarod isn't the one with all of the answers for a change. UH!!! Please, finish it! I beg of thee.
Reviewer: Slowly Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/07 09:11 pm
please continue. is she having the majors baby or is it jarods?
[Report This]Date: 10/01/07 05:37 pm
This is so good and original!! I hope you will write the sequel. It's one of the best stories I have read!! Please, keep writing!!
Reviewer: julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/05/06 04:27 pm
That's good !!! Where are the other chapters...???
Reviewer: Luv Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/09/05 06:55 pm
I loved your story !!! please keep writing, I am diying to know what is coming next.
Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/07/05 05:29 pm
This is so good. I can't wait for your next installment of the story. I am truly intrigued by how they are all going to respond to this.
Reviewer: eden Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/07/05 12:44 am
'You are lying.......' interesting move! but to recap a lil, i enjoyed her lil speech to the clone in part 2 very much! and the story of the genetics she is telling, i liked it, very creatÃve of you! minor note: she told ethan to call her 'miss parker' - though he kept on calling her 'sister' - my question would be why would she not suggest 'Parker' instead - he is her brother after all. good setup and plot!
Reviewer: jerseygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/07/05 05:16 pm
Very interesting story. I enjoyed it. Please update soon.
Reviewer: trish Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/07/05 10:01 am
