Oh wow. That was incredible, flowed nicely and was brilliantly constructed. Very clever to end it the way it began "dark and stormy night." Awesome. Also, I want to add that I read your bio and I truly hope that this year is kinder to you.Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 01:38 am
Nicely done, but just too sad.
MercyReviewer: Mercy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/07/07 09:03 pm
Not bad. You need to find a beta reader or something to help you because you have problems making your paragraphs flow without using "Anyways" (which isn't a word, btw). Not bad. You need some work though.Reviewer: Christine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/06/05 03:14 am