I am totally hooked up with this story! I like the idea of Alex beeing the father and forcing Parker to choose between betraying Jarod and her son's life. And Emily beeing involved with Alex will be another strike against Jarod. Hope after a lot of drama everything will turn out well:).
I now it's been a while, but PLEASE go on with it, I love it!!
Date: 24/08/09 03:51 pm
Please continue, wonderful story. ;)Reviewer: slayer_p Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 04:53 am
Indeed, will Miss Parker tell Jarod what is going on or not? A mother can't exactly let her child die, especially not someone like Miss Parker, even if it means sending Jarod back to hell? I too hope you'll update this story soon, even though it was a year ago it was first published!Reviewer: Mira Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/06 03:25 am
This is a really interesting story - well written, excellent dialogue and a nice build up of tension. I hope you are able to update it soon.Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/01/06 11:17 pm