Reviews For The Unthinkable
Title: Saying Goodbye

So sad, but very good. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Christina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/13 10:00 pm
Title: The Unthinkable

I loved this until Broots's death, I guess it could have a happier ending ;(

"Jarod didn’t let go. He held her more tightly as she continued to cry against him. He could feel her struggles becoming less and less with each passing second. Bending his head down he whispered in her ear, “I’m never letting you go. Never.” The struggling ceased for a few moments; the only sound around them was Miss Parker’s muffled cries. Jarod became surprised when Miss Parker wrapped her arms around him, holding onto him for dear life."

This one was GREAT! 

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/12 02:22 am
Title: Saying Goodbye

Great story! Too bad Broots had to die in this one.

Reviewer: electricq Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18/01/10 08:28 pm
Title: The Unthinkable

Great work as always!! Love the story!

Reviewer: aartemis Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/12/05 09:10 pm


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