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Title: Jarod Is Caught

I also found chapters 15-18 of "Gracie" on another site.  Are you in the process of bringing them over here?

http://www.retribution.pretendercentre.com/stories/gracie/gracie15.php



Author's Response: That website is actually mine lol, i havent updated it in ages there, but yes its being brought here, I will update it now for everyone

 Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/08 10:12 pm
Title: Jarod Is Caught

Interesting enough to make me want to read more, but there sure is a lot of sexual abuse of our boy in this story ~ I sincerely hope it is all fictional.

Author's Response: there is a lot of sexual abuse? lol, i dont remember there being that muc lol. but i do hope you like it and we will be updating soon. thanks Jeanne B

 Reviewer: Jeanne B Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/12/07 04:50 pm
Title: Jarod Is Caught

Is it just me or was this chapter suposed to be in a different story.  I didn't know any of the characters aside from Jarod and Lyle.  Made no sense to me in the context of this story, but the chapter intrigued me enough to want to read the story it was supposed to be in.

Wendy

 



Author's Response:

Sorry Wendy,  i put the wrong chapter in, the right one has been put up now.

note to self: pay attention to what you are doing 

The story that chapter was from is a story called At What Price.

 

 Reviewer: cywen69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/10/07 09:14 pm
Title: Jarod Is Caught

I like it a lot.  Fess up, though, which one of you wrote that shower scene?  Very vivid, um, imagery, and it confirms my suspicions that Jacci keeps cameras in the showerblocks:)

Seriously, though, the way you're adding depth to Gracie's character is fantastic.  You've really got me wondering who she is and where she came from.  Her interactions with Jarod are priceless!

Please write more soon.  I'll be sure to bug you until you do.



Author's Response: hey MP, thanks :D and for the shower scene, msot of that, if i remember is mine lol. I am Grace in the story and she had a very good ... looksee in the shower scene lol. and yay for the depth of Gracies character :D again she is mine, so im very pleased wiht that comment.

 Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/08/07 11:33 am
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