I've been working through the archives, and I really loved this story. I enjoyed "Entropy" as well (a difficult task to realistically depict breaking Jarod). This is the best Gemini story I have read yet, showing him as his own person with desires that may be in conflict with Jarod's. Also the story really follows through on the consequences of breaking down Jarod's psyche; once done this is not something that can be simply undone, no matter how well-intentioned his family might be. And no happy ending either!
Reviewer: MarieL Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/11/13 03:45 am
This story is so good, but you must put us out of our misery and finish it ~ I am going crazy wondering what will happen.
Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/12/07 06:42 pm
Okay, I was in JC Pennys the other day, and I walked past a display of gray pantsuits with violet blouses. All of the sudden "Entropy" popped into my head. It ruined my entire day! You will be my favorite PTB for all eternity if you'll just finish this story! It's haunting me. I'll shut up now, before you decide I'm in need of serious psychiatric care. Pretty please?
Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/07 09:26 pm
Okay, it's one am on the North American Atlantic Seaboard. I have to go to work in five hours and I haven't slept because I've been engrossed in this fic. After all that, PLEASE write more! I gotta know how it ends! It's very VERY dark, but I love every painful syllable. Please don't leave me hanging!
Author's Response:
Ohh, I have done that too, sat up engrossed in story hee hee. Thanks for your kind words (made my day and it has been a really crappy one too, so thanks for making me smile)
I really am hoping to write something on this soon, i sort of got sidetracked a teeny bit with running the sites.
thanks again, glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: MP Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/07/07 09:57 pm
So it's May 2007.. why is there not more!!!!
Author's Response:
Ummm cos the story was over?
Actually, more is coming I hope. Havent written in a long time and am out of practice badly. Going slowly with the little story and then hopefully get on concluding this.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/07 08:43 am
Hey!! I just wanted to drop in and say how much i have enjoyed this dark story thus far. I feel it's a very dark, and accurate reflection of what might have happened to Jarod if he was 'broken'. It's such a wonderful story, and it deserves to be finished! I hope you can post more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your words. It has been a long time since i stopped this, involved in too many other projects, and now the missing pieces upgrade is almost over, perhaps it is time to finish it. Once again thanks.
Date: 10/01/07 11:24 pm
So I read "Entropy" and this, it's so good, I really enjoy reading your stories! There are really dark, I love the way you describe every characters' feelings!! You are a great writer!! I want the sequel!!!!!!!!!!! Noooooooooooooow!! I can't wait!
Author's Response: Hi Julia, thanks so much for your kind words and encouragement (demands.. lol). I am really going to try to get on with the third and final part of this story soon.
[Report This]Date: 02/05/06 07:14 am
Hurray, at last an action-team is formed to save our boy.
Great to make them allies. Please hurry and write the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Arveyo, thanks so much for your reveiew, really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 01/08/05 11:40 pm
It's really nice to see the fam brought back in the story. I especially like the quick friendship aspect of Broots and Gem. I've aways like Broots as a character and always wanted to see a little bit more done with him. Looking for ward to chapter 2
Author's Response: Thanks Mrs Stacey, hope you enjoy the rest!!
[Report This]Date: 14/05/05 10:25 pm
