Bravo!! Danielle :-) You've created such a huge Madeline fan...me!! I love the character interactions & reactions, the dialogue, the rabbit (yes the rabbit) all of it and I'm already looking forward to the next update. (which I hope you are ready to post tonight.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. =) I originally planned on moving next to chapter 7, more season 3/Thomas stuff, but after hearing some feedback from my great betas about "Surprises Around Every Corner", I think season 2 stuff hasn't been fully explored yet. So it'll be another mid-chapter coming next! Stay tuned for some more fun Lyle stuff. ;) And yes, Bunny will make an appearance again, too. Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/04/10 05:20 am
That was very nicely done. I liked her fear of Lyle, Would be nice to see some of Madeline from his pov
Author's Response: Thank you again. =) Lyle definately senses Madeline's fear of men in general, and it definately goads him on! He's giving me a little trouble at the moment, but I'll beat him into submission soon. ;)
Date: 04/04/10 02:18 am
I love that scene about the stolen car, nice to see it from that point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks. =) It just begged to be written!
Date: 04/04/10 01:53 am
Oh the plot thickens, I hope she knows what she is doing, and Jarod better be looking out for her!!
Jarod's definately got her back- but hopefully she'll listen to him and not find trouble!Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/10 01:48 am
OH YES!!! Just read all three chapters and wow, I love that you incorporated Thomas into this fabulous story and YES, it meshes perfectly. "We came to an understanding.." Love that part! Wonderfully written fic here. Thanks for sharing!
Going back and rewatching the show again, I really really came to love Thomas and how happy he made Miss P... and I had to show Madeline's reaction to a strange man coming into the mix. Unfortunately, it doesn't end well, which is what the next chapter will be about. =( But right now, I'm working on a part revolving around the season 2 ep where Brigitte tried to kill Mr. P... Madeline always seems to find herself in awkward situations! ;)Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 06:21 am
Yes You had better dedicate this fic to us! You sent us spoilers before the episode aired and ..... Oh wait! That was ten years ago so I guess you're forgiven! :)
Alright so I'm being a bit of a smart ass but I haven't been able to give you a hard time in a very long time so I'm making up for it! :) And i remember what tough beta reader you were for my fics!!!! (Ha Ha!) OK, I've read 3 chapters so far so get back to writing, you've been a way too long and have a lot to make up for. It's good to have you back!
LOL- I can't believe I got so carried away I forgot everyone was in later time zones! Well, ok, knowing me I can totally believe it. =) I totally cracked up laughing rereading this part.
Be a smart ass all you want, I've missed it. If you're still writing TP fics, I'd love to be your beta again. =)
Over the weekend (my weekend is Sun-Mon), I'll watch Toy Surprise again, and start in on the part I want to insert between Chapter 1 and this one. =)Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/02/10 12:20 am
Hmmm, let me think about this one .... does it mesh with the other parts? Well it has my approval! :)
Author's Response: Well, I definately value your
onion opinion (can you tell I've been working a bit too much lately?! LOL), so that's good enough for me. =)
Date: 27/02/10 12:10 am