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Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

I love this so much. It's refreshing to read you! please please please update!

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/24 02:41 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Exquisitely written as always Mirage.

I need more of this in my life right now. Please update, continue, don't stop. I'm a hard core TP fan and TP addict. I love them and I love how precise you write them.

Reviewer: Imogen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/23 10:31 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Uhhuh! I can't get enough of this! More please?

Reviewer: Lizzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/23 10:20 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Gorgeous. I've enjoyed every word so far. You really have insight into the characters. This is the missing piece I've been waiting for.

Thank you sincerely.

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/23 01:02 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Bloody fantastic 😍😍😍 like everything you write!

Please please please 🙏❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 update all

of your stories and write more for us!!

 

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/23 09:10 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Mirage!!! I had to see if there were any updates to help get me thru the Thanksgiving crap and you're here!! Do you this on purpose? Post something for those who might be alone or depressed during the big days?? It seems you do. I've been reading for a couple of days, reading back through this earlier posts and chapters..I love this RETURN!!

Please post more!!

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/23 05:08 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

 

 

So DAM addicting!!!!!!!

 

I NEED MORE NOW!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/23 08:36 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

I'm so excited for more already. This has been a beautiful and painful journey for them so far. It has to be painful to work out all that has happened, she working for the people who kidnapped him, trying to bring him back, their pasts, their feelings. You explore it and resolve it brilliantly. I'm so in awe. More please!

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/23 11:24 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

I was on the heels of an existential crisis with so many Pretender family passing on and I have found comfort here.  This journey has been so refreshing, the way the characters grow and their lives transition. I love little Cate and that she poses challenges that Jarod and MP didn't expect.

You answered my emails and were so kind to me and I was surprised. Your writing voiceS you have many of them are different from you. It's like Mirage is a character you get in to first before writing. I'm impressed with your versality. Not that you sound unkind in your writing voice. I don't how to explain.

This is the first one of your stories I read and is the first one I am reviewing. I hope there is never a last chapter. Please never stop. We need to keep the fandom alive. Thank you for writing and your sage advice to me when I was having my crisis.

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/11/23 01:47 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Woot woot!! An update from Mirage is always a welcome sight. I. need to learn more about all of the questions raised. You won't disappoint. Please keep going!

Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/23 08:02 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Mesmerizing. You're one of those authors who always takes my hand and pulls me into the story. I forget where I am and my surroundings and become immersed in the images you create and evoke.

I like the darker stories where Jarod is darker and you write those scarily plausible and remarkably well, but there is something to be said about your outstanding ability to write Jarod and Miss Parker in a loving and understanding relationship. I was worried when he broke into her home and broke into Xander's. Obviously those Jarod and Miss Parker, and Jarod especially, has demons and I've always thought the bitterness, pain, feelings of betrayal and his darkness could easily lead to him doing something horrible to Miss Parker.

But that didn't happen in this series of yours and as much as I enjoy the canon aspect of those two being on opposing sides and bickering and how you write them more close to canon I also love how you carefully bring them together slowly. It takes time and work. You show that. It must be hard to show that, to have to write how they must reconcile all of the crap they've been through.

It's not cheesy, it's not rushed, it's still, and realistically so, a day to day effort for them. Things can't change for them for the better at the snap of a finger.

Amazing.

Thank you so much for this. It's a pleasure. Please continue.

Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/23 03:43 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

You're always in peak form. This first chapter of part 6 seamlessly transitioned from where they were. I love how you balance story consistency and brevity. You know what you're doing and you're doing it brilliantly. I hope you never stop. What I love about fanfic is that the authors write the story and that's the only focus. You aren't here to make money. It's fanfic like you say. All fanfic authors get paid in reviews and stars. It's much more pure and authentic to the Pretender tv series this way. You add only what will move the story forward or fill in blanks, and add to the characters' backstories to make their relatsionships even more profound. You stay on the path with what we already know.

I guess I'm still disappointed about the so called "official" novels. I thought they were going to continue where they left us, not change so much of the story including when Jarod escaped. It's like it became more about making money, but I'd spent money on the DVDs. That's the story I wanted to see continued. I don't want to spend more money on books that don't continue the DVD's story, and they haven't released another book yet either. I never thought I'd prefer fan written stories over the the novels written by the show's creators but I do. I prefer yours. I know you don't like this kind of talk and you don't want to hear it or read it. I think you should know how much I love your work. I want you to know.

I want you to know that many of your stories are my preferred continuations and endings. Your stories could all fit perfectly as a movie or episodes.

I want to see you continue this soon please.

Take care of yourself and happy holidays if you celebrate.

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/23 01:42 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Bravo!!

You keep getting better and better and I can't stop wanting more!

I'm so addicted.

This is perfect!!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/11/23 12:19 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Top notch writing as always. You're the one that keeps me coming back to the fandomly. I hope there will more about Broots and Emily. Pleae update this soon.

Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/23 11:36 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Whoa! This is pure gold.

There are houses like this. Recently a house was found inside of a house. There's the Winchester house. Tunnels beneath houses and driveways.

Paranoia and wealth make cuddly bedfellows. You throw misanthropy in to the mix for an even nicer and well hidden bed.

Broots is the man.

If Steven and Craig ever do include Broots in their fanfic novels or ever finally complete the story on tv or a movie I hope they have this same twist where Broots is DIA who infiltrated the Centre JUST LIKE IN THIS STORY!

It's a genius, pure stroke of genius.

I can't wait until I can read more.

Please make it so!

Reviewer: Kat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/23 11:26 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

It is intriguing and I love it.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/23 02:42 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Never stop writing and sharing!!!! If you do I'll break out the whips.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/23 11:26 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

You really know the characters and how to hold my fascination. I eagerly and impatiently wait for more.

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/23 09:06 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Brilliant.  😘

I feel Broots so much here as he's already been more normal, way outside of the Centre.

It was a stroke of freaking genius to make him a govt. infiltrator and now in control of keeping Jarod and Parker ahead of the govt.

I love this.

 

Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!!

More please?

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/11/23 05:05 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Top notch as always mate!

Keep going.

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/23 05:05 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Top notch as always mate!

Keep going.

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/11/23 05:05 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

Exquisite as always. You're a master story teller and I can't get enough!!!!

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/23 07:58 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

*BOWS*

 

More.

More.

More.

More.

 

Please!!

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/23 07:16 pm
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

It's plausible, amazingly written, the characters are perfect. It's pretender perfect.

Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/23 02:09 am
Title: The Return (Part VI: The New Normal)

OMG they are going to be alone finally and ... OMG. I can't wait to read more. Please hurry!

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/23 12:13 am
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