You did such a splendid job with his!! I can't wait to see how it's going to be continued.. see we told you would do and kick ass!! :P
Thank you very much KaiteQ! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Believe me this was a tough challenge, but Sarah kept me in line and with threats from Jacs re: the word limit, I was really sweating it.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/07 07:40 pm
Looking good RaChell, looking good. Especially like Lyle's little rant about viruses.
So who's gonna grab the next chapter?
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed Lyle. That's quite a compliment coming from my beta reader. Now you can stop beating me with that foam pointy stick of yours. (smiling)
OK so who is next?Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 03:47 am
Mr. Parker really is "Father of the Year" material, isn't he? Nice chapter, you kept them wonderfully in character, esp. Mr Parker and Raines.
So, who's doing the next chapter?
Oh I like that Cathy! "Father of the Year!" Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliments re: staying in character.
Don't know who is doing the next chapter but it isn't me! I was poked, bullied and etc into doing this one! And then Jacs wanted to play Lyle and take a finger or toe for every 100 words I was over.
Reviewer: Cathy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/06/07 12:00 am
This was really good. Poor Miss Parker, can't she see what kind of person "daddy" is?
Thank you Anna! I'm glad you enjoyed it, esp. the part re: Daddy Parker. I tried very hard to keep him 'in character'. (grin)
Sooo when will we see another story from you?
Reviewer: AJeff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/06/07 10:21 pm
You're very sweet Sarah but you are a hard act to follow. You really wrapped this chapter up nicely and yet you left the reader begging for more. That's a awfuly big order to fill! (throwing soft centered chocolates to Sarah as her Muse trys to intercept them) And I see from your response to Whashaza, I have no choice.
Yay, I caught one!
Oh please, you're just procrastinating. You and I both know you'll do great. And you're right, backing out was removed as an option a long time ago, better get used to it.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/07 08:20 pm
TaDa! It's finaly on Missing Pieces! Excellent! Great chapter Sarah and you really did this all on your own! I like your characters and the way you wrapped up some of the 'missing pieces' (winks and throws chocolates and roses at Sarah's and her Muse's feet)
OK, now the big question is ... how am I to follow you????
Oh thanks RaChell! *tries to grab chocolate but Muse kicks me in the gut and takes everything, then runs to hide* Hey!
And you say I don't give myself enough credit... You'll do great, and I have the inside information to prove it ;)Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/07 05:35 pm
Good update to the sleepyhead saga. Left a lot of possibilities for the next one which I gather is your beta. Liked it.
Oh thanks Whashaza!
Yes, RaChell said she'd be doing SL+8, and I'll make sure she's keeping that promisseReviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 04:49 am
This is such a fascinating twist to the story. Each layer has added more depth, but you have offered a very plausible answer behind the riddles and mystery behind the sickness. Wonderful job, Sarah!
Oh thank you so much Kat!
I spent some time trying to figure out what would make the Centre intentionally make Jarod sick, nice to hear it made sense to other people than myselfReviewer: Thunderchild Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/07 04:55 am
So good to read you again!!
I'm happy that you had great holidays!! You have been lucky to come when it started to snow!!^^
I'll wait for your sequels to the other stories!Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/02/07 11:17 am
Nicely done. Very intense. Great story line, very realistic and well thought out.
Why thank you so much, it all started with Jacs and her challange.
I do tend to go intense when writing and get sloppy with my spelling and stuff.
Glad this is readable and enjoyable at the same time.
Hugs~ArlsReviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/07 12:06 am
I just LOVE what you have done with this. It is completely awesome and the potential is now unlimited.... yay you
Ohhh lookie at all the fun toys here!! This is soo cools! Okay I am babbling...I am sooo happy to have kudos from a real Pretender Super Fan, wow that's sweet!
PS I couldn't resist the urge to keep Sleepyhead Alive!
PS x's 2 - Who's next?Reviewer: jaccione Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 09:26 pm