Under The Surface by Zsazsa

[Reviews - 145]

1. Chapter 1 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 12] (3439 words)

2. Chapter 2 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 5] (3185 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these charaters, they belong to NBC, TNT and MTM and I dont make money of this...and so on! Meaning: no point if you sue me cuz I don't have money!

3. Chapter 3 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 4] (3175 words)

4. Chapter 4 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 5] (3504 words)

5. Chapter 5 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 4] (3593 words)

6. Chapter 6 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 4] (3765 words)

7. Chapter 7 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3830 words)

8. Chapter 8 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3907 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these charaters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I dont make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native english!

THank you guys lots for the reviews!!! :)))))

9. Chapter 9 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3808 words)

10. Chapter 10 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 4] (3604 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these charaters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I dont make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native english!




To Ann, Eden, Ice_Queen, Eman and Lisa: Thank you guys for the reviews, I’m glad you like my story. Thank you VERY MUCH for the feedback!



To Nancy: Also to you, thank you VERY MUCH for your review and I hope you will like what’s coming up because… it ain’t over yet!! *winks*

11. Chapter 11 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (2840 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native English!

12. Chapter 12 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (4143 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these charaters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I dont make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native english!



To Michelle: Nervous breakdown, eh? Our kick-ass-god-ass?! *grins* just read on!

13. Chapter 13 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3654 words)
Warning: Language

Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native English!


To Michelle: Don’t give up posting your stories! There are lots of people who read it regularly and even LOVE it, but most of the people are too lazy to give feedbacks lol. I was like that before I started writing and since then whenever I like a story, I write a review. I know for an author it can be a great push! Thank you for your feedback! :)

To roguewriter04 : Thanks a lot for the feedback! So here is the next part, I hope you like it! :)

To Lisa: By the time you get home, you will have something to read! *grins*

14. Chapter 14 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 7] (3267 words)
Warning: Language

Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native English!

To JeZeBeL AKA Kamanaka Malia: Thanks for the review. However, it’s funny you say that because I got a lot of feebacks, saying they are IN character. That is my main aim and so far the thought that I managed to do a good job made me write. Now I was a bit uncertain –the upcoming 2 chapters are ready to post but if that really is the case, then I’m going to try to change that int he future. And about „Okey”. Many people who are a friend of mine and are native english use it as „Okey”, it’s probably the effect of chats, but I think people understand what I mean. Thanks for the review!

To Onisius: I will use less “!”...
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Yesssssssssssss I know it’s been AGES!! I’m sorry guys, I neglected you, I was busy and had my attention elsewhere but I thought, it was time to show that no, the story is NOT forgotten! Just to make it up for you, you get 4 new chapters! Yep, you read it right, 4! I just really hope you like it and don’t forget, I had no beta reader, except from chapter 17! So… enough babble! Enjoy! And do not forget feedback!

15. Chapter 15 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 11] (3302 words)
Warning: Language!

Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native English!

16. Chapter 16 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 5] (2773 words)
Please note that this story was NOT corrected by a beta-reader! I am going to have one for my next fic but for this last time –please ignore my mistakes, considering I’m not native English!

17. Chapter 17 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 6] (3290 words)
Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

18. Chapter 18 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 7] (4571 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!


Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

Also: I’ve finished the story so as I get the chapters back from my wonderful beta, I’ll upload them. I know it’s been an awfully LONG time since I updated last so a short summary: After a late night at the Centre, Broots disappears without any trail. Jarod joins Sydney and Miss Parker looking for him, -even with Parker’s “lack of enthusiasm” about it-and after saving him from Lyle at the very last minute, they find out a secret that changes their lives. But the Centre would not be the Centre if they wouldn’t do WHATEVER it takes to find them and they catch up. Broots, Ethan, the Major and Sydney has to “rescue” Jarod and Miss Parker from the Centre which tehy can manage only with one person’s help; Angelo. After their escape… :

19. Chapter 19 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 2] (3936 words)
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

20. Chapter 20 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 4] (5295 words)
I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

21. Chapter 21 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 2] (4383 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

22. Chapter 22 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 6] (4506 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

23. Chapter 23 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 5] (4170 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!
And also many thanks for EVERYONE who reviewed! And also special thanks to phi4858 because this review reminded me that I forgot to update! Thank you!

24. Chapter 24 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3660 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!
Phi4858: Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it even after a hard day:D Thanks so much for the feedback, I appriciate it a lot!
Dolphin18paradise: Promise is a promise! Here we go!
Nans: Hey there! I haven’t talked to you in ages! I’m going to send you a mail! Thanks for reviewing!
Jenifer: Here you go:D Thank you!

25. Chapter 25 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 8] (4433 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

To everyone who reviewed; I am very excited that you keep reading my story, even though it’s quite long. I kind of neglected for a long time but it won’t take that long to get all the remaining (5) chapters up here. Thanks for reading!

26. Chapter 26 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 5] (4500 words)
Summary: Just right after everyone seem to get used to the changes in the Centre, suddenly the events take a sudden change...

Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

NOTE: This chapter has not been checked by a beta-reader. If anything bothers you, I’m sorry but you’ll have to put up with it… there’s more to this story than 100 precise grammar. This, of course, doesn’t mean I didn’t proof-read them. The chapter will be replaced by the beta versions once I get them. :) Enjoy!

27. Chapter 27 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (3863 words)
Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

NOTE: This chapter has not been checked by a beta-reader. If anything bothers you, I’m sorry but you’ll have to put up with it… there’s more to this story than 100 precise grammar. This, of course, doesn’t mean I didn’t proof-read them. The chapter will be replaced by the beta versions once I get them. :) Enjoy!

28. Chapter 28 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 6] (3350 words)
Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

NOTE: This chapter has not been checked by a beta-reader. If anything bothers you, I’m sorry but you’ll have to put up with it… there’s more to this story than 100 precise grammar. This, of course, doesn’t mean I didn’t proof-read them. The chapter will be replaced by the beta versions once I get them. :) Enjoy!

29. Chapter 29 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 3] (4176 words)
MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

This chapter has not been checked by a beta-reader. If anything bothers you, I’m sorry but you’ll have to put up with it… there’s more to this story than 100 precise grammar. This, of course, doesn’t mean I didn’t proof-read them. The chapter will be replaced by the beta versions once I get them. :) Enjoy!

30. Chapter 30 by Zsazsa [Reviews - 6] (1540 words)

I don’t own these characters, they belong to NBC and MTM and I don’t make money of this...and so on!

Note: MANY MANY thanks to Dianne for beta-reading it for me! You are such a big help! Thanks really a lot!

NOTE: This chapter has not been checked by a beta-reader. If anything bothers you, I’m sorry but you’ll have to put up with it… there’s more to this story than 100 precise grammar. This, of course, doesn’t mean I didn’t proof-read them. The chapter will be replaced by the beta versions once I get them. :) Enjoy!