Oh wow, this one is begging for a continue. Great read so far.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 06/01/11 01:10 am
Big gap from the first story, but this one is missing it's major additions. Great storyline though. I'd like to know more about Wynne. Please continue soon.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/10 06:05 pm
It is sad to see so many wonderful stories unfinished. I've read this one several times and always feel disappointed to reach the unfinished ending. You have a talent for writing, and the characters you write are perfectly done to the episodes. the character you created are done with imagination and fit into the story as though they have always belonged there.
Reviewer: Zipp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/11/06 05:05 pm
It is sad to see so many wonderful stories unfinished. I've read this one several times and always feel disappointed to reach the unfinished ending. You have a talent for writing, and the characters you write are perfectly done to the episodes. the character you created are done with imagination and fit into the story as though they have always belonged there.
Reviewer: Zipp Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/11/06 04:33 pm
come on! it's been a long time. i really want to know what will happen! :o)
Reviewer: miska Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/05 01:18 pm
Please give us the rest of the story. I can't wait to read what will happened next !!!
Reviewer: Nathou Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/08/05 06:37 pm
I would like to see how this plays out. It is interesting and different, refreshing. Keep it up.
Reviewer: Emilia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/07/05 09:32 pm